yay! i liked this A LOT. it is lolarious and awesome all the way through, like the best bits of 'by the sword' and none of the endlessly boring bits.
man, do NOT take a road trip with villiard, though. that was obvious. i know they all want to be with him and bask in his glory or whatever, but the man is mental. although i <3 him listening to nirvana. but not liking it. but secretly liking it.
all the suba/villiard stuff is great - including the bizarre bit where they get chucked out, have a massive scowl fight and then suba goes to get him some fish. that's so absurd and lovely of him, and it's a really great moment for both of them.
also - all the fencing stuff is really good. i love how confidentally you write villiard's criticisms of people. i genuinely believe he is a master fencer, and obviously i know nothing, but it is very convincing.
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Date: 2013-06-03 09:34 pm (UTC)man, do NOT take a road trip with villiard, though. that was obvious. i know they all want to be with him and bask in his glory or whatever, but the man is mental. although i <3 him listening to nirvana. but not liking it. but secretly liking it.
all the suba/villiard stuff is great - including the bizarre bit where they get chucked out, have a massive scowl fight and then suba goes to get him some fish. that's so absurd and lovely of him, and it's a really great moment for both of them.
also - all the fencing stuff is really good. i love how confidentally you write villiard's criticisms of people. i genuinely believe he is a master fencer, and obviously i know nothing, but it is very convincing.