Writing, writing

Hey, does anyone have time to beta a 9k-odd Master/Rani and Master/Doctor fic? I am unhappy with it, and I can't tell if that's because there's something wrong with it or if it's just the general antipathy I always have toward my finished and unposted work.

Also, in the interests of making this post worthwhile and also making sure this meme gets absolutely everywhere:

Pick a character and I will give and explain the top five ideas/concepts/etc I keep in mind while writing that character that I believe are essential to accurately depicting them. Any and all characters welcome (including ones I haven't written but might know about).

From aralias and a bunch of other people.