http://sydneywi.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] sydneywi.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] neveralarch 2010-08-29 01:35 am (UTC)

I really liked the episodic quality of this, it made it flow really nicely in a lovely arc

I also really liked this:

The Doctor was also hanging over the Master's shoulder and breathing on his neck. It was very unnerving and also suspiciously nice, and the Master was glad when the lock finally clicked and he could slowly push the door open.

:)

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