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marah_sarie ([identity profile] marah-sarie.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] neveralarch 2010-07-22 11:30 am (UTC)

Quotey comment is full of quotes, sorry. But I can't help myself!

'"We were at school together."
"At school?" Zoe raised her eyebrows.


Hah, I love that Zoe gets it straight away. Clever, clever girl.

'"Jamie, let me see if I can explain." Thomas broke in. "Father means that he and the Doctor used to be very close." He raised his eyebrows as well and then, not to be outdone by the Colonel, waggled them.

"Oh!" said Jamie, finally understanding. "Like me and the Doctor now!"'


...while Jamie, of course, is oblivious. :D

'"No-o," said Heppy. "Well, sort of. It was the Germans, do you see? He was fighting the Germans, and I'd snuck into the nursing corps. I wasn't old enough, not really."'

Oh. OH. And it suddenly clicks. Great moment, that.

'"Your trousers will fall down," said Jamie.

"Nah," said Perrott. "Got a belt." He buckled it as an afterthought.'


Your Two, Jamie and Zoe voices are all so SPOT ON, it's amazing, but it's these little lines with the other characters that are cracking me up (like with Edwards waiting until Koschei offers him his normal fee for viewing the jewels.)

'A face appeared, that of a man with dark hair and very odd sideburns. "This is the War Chief. You have a report, Smythe?"'

OoooOOOOOOoooooohhhhh, THIS GONNA BE GOOD. :D :D :D

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