Aha, my sneaky 'I wonder if Katy would beta this for me' post worked! I'm hoping to have at least a second draft by tomorrow... or Friday... or soon anyway, and it would really help me out if you would take a look at it. And I can totally trade betas if you need it!

And hooray for car! I finally got a proper working keyboard on my laptop too, so hooray for that! Everything mostly works!