Nice job! Great creative exploration of the conflict-raising role of sexuality, whatever its form, in defining the self and delineating the scope and tenure of relationships. Also, I love your Koschei's mom --- filled with infinite wisdom and good advice, she is --- and that Time Lords are hermaphroditic (or did I get that wrong?), especially as any reproductive organs could be considered redundant, for all their emergency purpose in case the looms go out.

P.S. Perhaps this would be a good thing to post as asexy_who.